tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969357367981155844.post329156760345737898..comments2013-05-17T13:01:19.714-04:00Comments on subi snacks: Portfolio!Tracy Subisakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08672983052737278017noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969357367981155844.post-47638678669274485932009-01-22T22:24:00.000-05:002009-01-22T22:24:00.000-05:00Hey Tracy,I think your teaser is a really good sta...Hey Tracy,<BR/>I think your teaser is a really good start...you are onto something with the idea of communicating your personality through the teaser...<BR/><BR/>That being said, I think you could refine it a little more. The page with you and the head/heart/hand business is strong...maybe have the title page, and then that page, and then three projects- 1 of each that relates more specifically to the head/heart/hand. Doing something like that will help the teaser 'flow' and feel more cohesive. It also may not be necessary to include too much info about each project...instead, just a snippet!<BR/><BR/>Hope that helps!?Carlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09538954533159252147noreply@blogger.com